I have been running along these withering walls for what seems like an eternity. The walls are old; their paint falling off at places, baring the tired bricks which must have held this structure for years. Rugged and faded portraits grace them like a fatigued smile, hiding the melancholy of a broken heart. The lights on the ceiling flicker as I pace through this abandoned alley; my lungs ache from all the running as I make my way through the ruins of my present!
The path ahead seems like a far-fetched dream. No withering walls, no saddened paintings; only angelic lights. What lies ahead, seems like an ethereal aisle, a walk down which must lead you to heavens; the epiphany of happiness!
Every now and then, I try to catch a glimpse of what follows me….and I find myself staring down the eyes of darkness, sheer darkness, engulfing the foyer and its carcass. Brisk steps give way to long leaps as I think about the roads of regret which I left behind.
I am running because I have been there before, beyond the dark wall, fallen for the trickery of the past; spent days thinking about “What would have been…” and “What would have not…”!
I have been running along these withering walls for what seems like an eternity but….
I never reached that light, the past never stopped following me and I never escaped the ruins of my present!
You are touching my soul with your words…
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I am glad that my work was able to make you feel that way….Thank you so much! I am so glad you like it!
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You very welcome, and I am very happy that your words make me feel that way🦋thank you.
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My pleasure!😊❤
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“hiding the melancholy of a broken heart…” We always fail at the hiding part of it.
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Very true! Hiding our pain and sadness is indeed the most difficult!
Thank you so much for sharing this here!
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Amazing Description…I know this place….
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I believe that we all have been there! We all get into this race at least once in our life time; try to chase our future, run away from our past, neglect and abandon our present!
….thank you so much! I am so glad that you like my work!
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That’s me, Thank you sincerely🙂
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That’s me too….😅🙂
My pleasure!😊❤
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As usually, so deep and flawless! “my lungs ache from all the running as I make my way through the ruins of my present!” Loved it!! So powerful!
I guess we’re all running and few reach the desired destination!
Great work 🙂
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Such a motivating comment!😊
I am so glad that you like the article!
I agree! We are all running, chasing our goals but only a few of us succeed! In my opinion, the reason due to which so many of us can’t reach our destinations in spite of the efforts that we make, is that, we tend to ignore and abandon our present; the sheen of our goals blinds us to the next step that we need to take in our journey!
Thank you so much for sharing this here! Really means a lot!😊
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My pleasure always 😊
Well I believe that we only have the present moment and we should not only embrace it, we should glorify it! Because tomorrow is not guaranteed! Loved how you state it “the sheen of our goals blinds us👍👍” it’s too bad because we are missing our life and there’s no rewind
Best of luck always 😊👍
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There is always light at the end of tunnel.
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Indeed! …..And that light is the reason for which we all should keep moving forward!
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Your images are filled with so much color and truth. Thanks for sharing your writing.
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I am so glad that you like my writing style!
My pleasure!😊😊…..I love sharing these pieces of writing with all of you!
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Very much like.
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Thank you so much!😊
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Amazingly written, as usual… Loved the description, I could feel the pain…
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Thank you so much! I am so glad that you like it and that I was able to convey the emotions through my words!😊❤
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You have a way with words. So simple, yet so powerful ❤ I feel you, Gauri.
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Thank you so much Riddhi! That comment really motivates me to keep on writing!😊
I am glad that you like my writing style!
The fact that I was able to connect with you through my words is a very big compliment for me as a writer!😊❤
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Much love always ❤
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😊❤
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Much love always ❤
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😊❤
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Brilliant share Gauri lovely title too
keep blogging
Have a beautiful day
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Thank you so much! I am so glad you like it!
Have a great day!😊
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You’re most welcome Gauri 😊
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That which no longer serves……..thank it for “it’s” service and set it free….
Love be Your guide on Your beautiful and Unique Journey
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Very true! Life is a continuous journey. We can’t afford to stop at every hindrance and start dwelling at it! One must learn to set “heart-breaks’ and ‘pain’ free and follow the light of love!
Thank you so much for sharing this here! Really means a lot!
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Grattitude to You for Your words. Yes, focusing on “pain” only sends more “pain”, The ‘same’ apply’s, ‘focusing on Love creates more Love
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My pleasure!😊…..
I agree!🙂
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well written!
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Thank you so much! I am so glad you like it!😊
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